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Just have to add that there's a law here in the States concerning that darn metric system. I think it happened back in the 80s, and it said, in my ...

Try to lengthen sentences with conjunctions and punctuation. Short sentences make the text seem unintelligent . One of the other reviewers mentioned that, and it caught my eye because it ...

And, I'm finally here! I really enjoyed reading this, too. It was funny, it was entertaining. It was strangely poignant, perhaps because the realm of super heroes is supposed to ...

All righty! I'm Rach, and I'm reviewing today (in case that wasn't obvious.) Got a few boring technical matters to mention before I get to the fun stuff, so bear ...

If you don't keep posting, you're gonna have one very, very sad Rachael on your hands. (Even if I have been AWOL, a fact for which I apologize immensely. I ...

My inner comma-defender, it is happy. And so are my other technical nitpicking senses. You even got the subjunctive right! In fact, on the technical side of things, I've only ...

You might not even really need the bribes any more to get me to come read this. I'm addicted. Really addicted. So, you can keep the bribes. Really, I mean ...

Hi there Crimsona! Rach here, as requested... somewhat late, but still here. And that's what counts, right? Now, on to critique! You know you have grammar problems, and others have ...

You know, if my friends knew that I was reading a romance novel and actually enjoying myself, they'd never let me live it down. But how can I not enjoy ...

Looks like Snoink gave you some great advice. I'd take all of it. Looks like you might have already. Anyway, apologies for the lateness. I've been a bad YWSer. My ...

Hey Elinor! A bazillion kazillion apologies that I'm delivering this so late. I don't even know what good it'll do you. Two Fact Police things first. One, at least from ...

Hey Shubhi! Sorry this took me so long. You know, one school year, I wrote at least one essay a week for several months, and then about an essay every ...

Aw, it's like Jane Austen! In modern times! I get it now. (Up until now, my romance-genre-avoiding tactics left me unprepared in this new realm. But now I think I'm ...

I don't really know all that much about scripts, but I saw this on here and thought I'd at least give it a read. And I'm glad I did! It ...

Whoa! So, that bit with Gattlin at the end was really, really good! Short, but powerful. And I know I've been kinda sporadically reviewing Fleirzon here, but I think I'm ...