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R.Harini

  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Collection

    Incredible. I adored these short, touching poems which echoed a sense of pain, desperation and silent hope through each verse. Though you say the poems were unrelated, jarring emotions and ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: Lament

    Beautiful. I adore this short poem, which filled with jarring emotions and a striking message make for a moving read. The "Scattering Amber" description was apt and added a new ...

    Apr 13, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hopeless Wishes

    Beautiful and Heart Wrenching. I absolutely adore the metaphors and descriptions, especially the parts,"The sun was shy behind your eyes, The roses were hiding behind curtains in your cheeks". The ...

    Apr 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Literature Re: It wasn't her fault

    An amazing piece. Full of emotions and describing the bare truth through your words. The imagery is subtle yet painful and I absolutely love the repetition of the line "Maybe ...

    Apr 9, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Don't Trust the Light

    Haunting, Beautiful and powerful. Darkness is often so associated with death, doom and despair to the point it has also become a ready cliche. You do have a way with ...

    Apr 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: She's Here!

    This poem is dark, haunting and amusing at the same time. This women who should be a figment of his past comes again to torture him, make him crawl and ...

    Apr 6, 2020


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown