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Re: A Collection
Incredible. I adored these short, touching poems which echoed a sense of pain, desperation and silent hope through each verse. Though you say the poems were unrelated, jarring emotions and ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: Lament
Beautiful. I adore this short poem, which filled with jarring emotions and a striking message make for a moving read. The "Scattering Amber" description was apt and added a new ...
Apr 13, 2020 -
Re: Hopeless Wishes
Beautiful and Heart Wrenching. I absolutely adore the metaphors and descriptions, especially the parts,"The sun was shy behind your eyes, The roses were hiding behind curtains in your cheeks". The ...
Apr 11, 2020 -
Re: It wasn't her fault
An amazing piece. Full of emotions and describing the bare truth through your words. The imagery is subtle yet painful and I absolutely love the repetition of the line "Maybe ...
Apr 9, 2020 -
Re: Don't Trust the Light
Haunting, Beautiful and powerful. Darkness is often so associated with death, doom and despair to the point it has also become a ready cliche. You do have a way with ...
Apr 6, 2020 -
Re: She's Here!
This poem is dark, haunting and amusing at the same time. This women who should be a figment of his past comes again to torture him, make him crawl and ...
Apr 6, 2020
