QuietQuilla

Love the critics honestly, I am one of those people when I start to write I blindly get the words on the paper, then making sure they are diagrammaticly correct ...

Thanks, ^_^ Write as I would speak at times, these are one of those times, apparently.

Lol (nick pick) Thanks

Thank you very much for the review and time!! And I see exactly what you mean. ^_^ There were things that I saw and that you pointed out that I ...

Thank you!!

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Well, the diction of the narrative writing in the story is sort of semi- modern/ old English, while (I think) you're trying to go for the mid-evil type of diction. ...

Ha ha, Thanks for the tip! ^_^

Thanks so much!! ^_^

The honor was mine. ^_^

I just want to thank anyone and everyone who has or will review this chapter. I apologize for all critical mistakes, but am glad for the feed back. That is ...

I understand completely. I thank you for the review as well as I can now see exactly what you mean. I look forward to learn more from this community!

Thank you very much for the tips. I wrote this about 2 years ago and might extend it. Now that u point it out I will be able to correct ...

QuietQuila desu! I love this soon much! The dramatic love of orange juice is so powerful. *lol* This made my day before work. I love how it's timeless and anyone ...

QuietQuila desu! I love this soon much! The dramatic love of orange juice is so powerful. *lol* This made my day before work. I love how it's timeless and anyone ...