QuietQuilla

QuietQuilla desu! Wow, I loved this. I work at fast food place as well and this is so true. Ha, I love reading things like this; real, funny, and it ...

QuietQuilla desu! Alright! I love outline for this poem, but the execution was a bit messy. When you used, "Don't keep me trapped in my own crazy head." Then repeated, ...

QuietQuilla desu! I like this poem, but I feel as if it could have been better though out. Firstly, "Bloodshot eyes, looking down at bloody thighs. Tears running down her ...

QuietQuilla desu! After I started reading this I couldn't stop. It's wonderfully- sad, this piece. The reader, at some point wants things to get better for the main character; yet ...

QuietQuilla desu! I really like this! It made me smile just by reading it once, then I had to go back for more. I loved it. The thought of someone ...

QuietQuilla desu! I really like this write. "A storm did brew within me, and it grew day by day. It blocked the path of smiles; it turned my heart to ...

QuietQuilla desu! I really like this poem, mostly because I feel like most people can relate to it. In today's society people don't generally get up and do something about ...

QuietQuilla desu! I really like this poem. It's seductive and a little bittersweet. But i think it could be stronger--better. "My soft, pale hands touching your rough, olive-skin." The use ...

QuietQuilla desu! I really like this piece, but be careful of the " girls" there. I feel that you miss a few punctuation marks in the writing; purposely or not. ...