Quetseli

Thank you very much for the review. :] I can relate to how it can be boring because I'll read and kinda get bored with it too :/. I have ...

I was just joking with my post. (Well, maybe I was a little serious). I just always wanted a reason to use that pic. :p But, hey, give us Americans ...

Thanks a bunch Pink! I can see where things might need clearing up, but a few things I like to keep. Some things you said that don't need to be ...

Nah, I don't blame you. I'll just make sure the reader knows he's Southern so they remember to read his voice in that way. I can see how it can ...

Why thank for the like and the comment! With the serial killer, I was afraid to post this because people might see it vulgar or see me disgusting, but you ...

OMG! I feel so stuipd now! >:[ Thinks for the pointers, I'll work one those too. :] I think I messed up because I was thinking about the five senses ...

Yeah, it wasn't good. So I changed it now from "Your own Death" to "You're fading away"(As you can see). I just hope it's a better choice. :p

Wow, thinks for all the comments! I didn't really think people would take a second look at this. Big surprise! X3 To the people who pointed out mistakes-I think I ...

It's a well written poem! The only thing I have to say is to remember poems don't always rhyme. Somethings you said confused me, but I understood your purpose. But ...

This is real good, actually! You described things very well and did a lot of relating, it stood out. Good job, I want to see chapter one! Keep it up!

Thsi is a lovely poem! I think the title is fine. I'm not the greatest title creator, but this is my suggestion X3: Thinking Through Heart. I don't know, but ...

This is so very well done. I'm impressed. It's a moving piece of work with many different emotions caught in it. Lovely, lovely work. Keep it up!

This is real good! I felt like I was reading this from some poetry book instead of from an online site. X3 It has a good story to it and ...

Very well done! The rhyming and everything was perfect! I love happy poems, they always make me smile. And this one did. :3 Keep up the great work!

It's a sad poem, but I like it! There are a few word mistakes I caught, but those can be fixed. The emotion in this is very noticeable and I've ...