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Re: Blank Page and Not Listening
You're very welcome, thank you for sharing your thoughts
Apr 23, 2016 -
Re: Blank Page and Not Listening
Thank you very much, I really appreciate your feedback
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: if i were a color
I like to consider myself a vibrant emerald green, but I asked my best friend and he said yellow, like a bee. Huh.
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Untitled
You are most certainly welcome. :)
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Blank Page and Not Listening
There was effort involved actually. I think that when you have something this short, it is on the reader to put in the effort. I'm not the one who is ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Blank Page and Not Listening
I actually intentionally left them out, my poetic style places great emphasis on what punctuation I include and exclude; it all has a reason behind it.
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: Stars and Galaxies
Not a review, just popping by to say this has been my view for a while, and I love how you said it so beautifully. I like to say that ...
Mar 14, 2016 -
Re: The Inevitable
Hey, even the best are still learning. You'll get there, I believe in you. :)
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: I'm Trying to Talk to You
Thank you very much, I appreciate your feedback!
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: I'm Trying to Talk to You
Thanks for the feedback! The structure was in fact intentional, I wanted to maintain uniformity throughout the poem. And the line breaks are actually a new technique I'm trying where ...
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: To the Giants
Just thought I'd let you know "eraser to my pencil of doubt" made my day.
Nov 30, 2015 -
Re: Death's Last Dance
It definitely shows. Good job!
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Death's Last Dance
Not a review, just a comment that when I was reading this it sounded in my head like a song, it's so rhythmic. Nice job, this would be cool to ...
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Guilt
All the better for poetry!
Nov 24, 2015 -
Re: Burning Books
Thank you very much! I'm glad it has that sort of effect. I was looking for an emotional response.
Nov 23, 2015
