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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Blank Page and Not Listening

    You're very welcome, thank you for sharing your thoughts

    Apr 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Blank Page and Not Listening

    Thank you very much, I really appreciate your feedback

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: if i were a color

    I like to consider myself a vibrant emerald green, but I asked my best friend and he said yellow, like a bee. Huh.

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Untitled

    You are most certainly welcome. :)

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Blank Page and Not Listening

    There was effort involved actually. I think that when you have something this short, it is on the reader to put in the effort. I'm not the one who is ...

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Blank Page and Not Listening

    I actually intentionally left them out, my poetic style places great emphasis on what punctuation I include and exclude; it all has a reason behind it.

    Apr 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Stars and Galaxies

    Not a review, just popping by to say this has been my view for a while, and I love how you said it so beautifully. I like to say that ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Inevitable

    Hey, even the best are still learning. You'll get there, I believe in you. :)

    Jan 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: I'm Trying to Talk to You

    Thank you very much, I appreciate your feedback!

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: I'm Trying to Talk to You

    Thanks for the feedback! The structure was in fact intentional, I wanted to maintain uniformity throughout the poem. And the line breaks are actually a new technique I'm trying where ...

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: To the Giants

    Just thought I'd let you know "eraser to my pencil of doubt" made my day.

    Nov 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Death's Last Dance

    It definitely shows. Good job!

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Death's Last Dance

    Not a review, just a comment that when I was reading this it sounded in my head like a song, it's so rhythmic. Nice job, this would be cool to ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Guilt

    All the better for poetry!

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: Burning Books

    Thank you very much! I'm glad it has that sort of effect. I was looking for an emotional response.

    Nov 23, 2015


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