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Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 18
Firstly, a monologue is longer than that. Find a new word in paragraph 20. Secondly, this chapter is by far the most interesting one yet. I love it. Great way ...
Nov 17, 2015 -
Re: Phantom Jungle Cat
Hello! Questio here to review this fun little poem for you! I noticed that you had punctuation at the very end. I think that if you are going to have ...
Nov 16, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 17
Whoa. Did all that between Ria and her mom happen right in front of everyone? I would think that would draw attention, those sorts of threats. Queenie, you have a ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Fortissimo: Chapter Two (part one)
Hey there! Here to shoot another review! In what part of the world is dawn at 8:30 in the morning? Because I think you should mention that early on. Dawn ...
Nov 6, 2015 -
Re: Fortissimo: Chapter One (part two)
Hello! I told you I'd leave a review, so here I go! I hate nitpicking, but you misspelled "forty" as "fourty" multiple times. Also, there are a few parts where ...
Nov 5, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 15
What is up Queenie? Here to offer a little bit on this newest edition to my favorite work in progress I've been reading (don't ask how many I'm reading...) and ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: Card Towers
I must admit, I really liked this little story. You definitely have a message here that everyone can apply to their lives, and that makes for a wonderful piece of ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Ehud
OK. So this was interesting. And because it was interesting, I think I am going to go ahead and leave my two cents in a review for you. Love the ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 14
Ok, that is weird, people reviewing wrong stuff. Anyway, how long has it been since I reviewed something of yours? Too long. I'm gonna drop the review-as-I-go approach just this ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: merely a Mist?
Hello! Q here to give you a nice little review! The grammar here is very weird. I know that it is a poem, so grammar doesn't matter as much, but ...
Oct 30, 2015 -
Re: Sunset
Tear it apart? It is much to good for that. But I will review it for you, as I quite enjoyed it. But be warned: I know very little about ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: The Death Train
Hello! Questio here to review! What I like to do is review as I read, so it really is more of a commentary. Every paragraph of my review matches up ...
Sep 30, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 10
What's up?!?! Q here to review (hey that rhymes!) this awesome addition to an awesome novel. Let's do this. Paragraph by paragraph. Something to consider is at the end and ...
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: Thrallmagic: Chapter 9
You know, it has been a while since I gave you a review. So here goes! I'm going to stick to my standard "commentary as I read" thing, so you ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
I very much enjoyed this story! The writing was smooth, and more importantly, consistent. The tone of the narrator never altered. It was distant enough to keep it brief, but ...
Sep 10, 2015
