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First, off this was interesting, It isn't really my cup of tea but I did find it interesting. The only problem I had was I really wouldn't have categorized this ...

This is a good start. Kind of confusing as to where you are going with this story. But i would like to see. I would make this the prologue since ...

Awww. This is sad. But it is a little rushed. and It was confusing as to who was talking and who died. but you cleared that up at the end. ...

OMG! Ok so you HAVE to write the third chapter. I am like in love with this story!! I honestly can't wait until the next chapter. I LOVE LOVE LOVE ...

I liked this story a lot! it was a little rushed. and it left me wondering a lot. I had a lot of questions. So i suggest you slow down ...

Omg. I was like seriously about to cry. I think they should have names though. Other than I couldn't find anything else wrong with it. (maybe because I was too ...

I thought this was so funny! haha. The only thing that Heroes fear are Super Hero Wives! I loved the last line!! :D

I liked it. but it seems a little rushed and has a lot of holes in the story. Give some background to the characters. They don't have structure and i ...

First, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! and i am being totally serious. (lets just say I have a thing for demon stories) But the one thing I didn't like, when she ...

Damn. I feel bad for Nate. I can totally relate with what the girl is going through, loving two people at the same time. And being told you have to ...

Awwwwwwwwwwww!!! This was too cute!! And pretty good for a story made up on the fly, :D A little bit of grammar mistakes you can fix but other than that ...

I liked this. It has the imagery i can never seem to do. :( Anyway, it was also a little bit confusing as to who was speaking (but you cleared ...

Hey. I liked this story, well not the abusive part but it really does bring to light the reality of abusive relationships and how that kind of love is wrong. ...

I loved this! I laughed so loud, my mother is looking at me weird. I also love the Harry Potter references, im a fan. Well i guess that's it since ...

THE ENDING IS EPIC! it kinda reminds me of me and my own brother without all the sexual innuendos and implications. This is cool. Not something i would usually read ...