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Re: The Book
I could totally relate to this poem. I've always loved books myself. This is good. But something doesn't flow quite right. I can't really figure it out myself but hopefully ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
I liked this, you don't see love portrayed in society today like this, usually it is something that is glorified and something everyone wants. But this showcases the flaws and ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: The Effect
Ok so everyone else has said what I was thinking or going to say. I honestly think your friend will LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know I do :D. But is Boyer ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: The Violet Saga: Year One
Chica!!! my love!! I love love love this!! Even if i did help write it :) Ok so we definitely gonna have to figure out the second chapter tomorrow. Im ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Empty Mind
I liked it. I can totally relate. I am going through writer's block myself right now and it is so fustrating! Anyway i thought this was cool. Keep writing. :D
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Damn!!! I only read the ending because I am short on time but now i'm really going to have to go read the rest of it. Great job!!! Wow!! I ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Alexandra Chapter 3
Ok so this was a little confusing. I couldn't figure out who was talking at times and where they were. Like the scences didn't make sense. I needed more description. ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Shine of Darkness
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS. Tell little man, I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! And im not just saying it. This is great. Now im gonna have to go write something epic ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Alexandra Chapter 2
Very Little Mermaid-esque but love it. it is like a funnier version of the movie. Love it! You did have some flow problems that were a little awkward at times ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Inside of a Star [Chapter Two]
First. You know the whole memory thing that we talked about, and you misspelled some words and work on your grammar in some places. That's the bad part. The good ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Five Minutes In Heaven
I disagree with April, I think men should carry us more :P But it was grammar lacking. and it lacked the most important part. The end!!!! I wanna know what ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Stealing Grace (Part 3 of 3)
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! Omg!!! This was so cute! You had some spelling mistakes and what not. But overall it was cute! The ending was a little akward. It's flow was off or ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Stealing Grace (Part 1 of 3)
Ok so this is a good start, I liked it. Now i can read part 2 and 3. But the thing was give a little bit more imagery to the ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Grace
This was was a little akward at times. But now i wanna read the novella!! Greg is the jealous type, And he is so rude. How do I steal Grace? ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Colorful
This was WHOA! It was a really good story that it took me like three times read it because I wanted to savor every bit. Anyway, the only things I ...
Apr 4, 2011