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Hmmm... most of what I had to say has been said already. I liked reading it, but I agree with Wolf - almost all the description was visual, and it ...

Uh, yeah, having Nora kill him in the end would be a bit much, wouldn't it? I think it's interesting that I liked it better when I read it, too, ...

Hmmm.... I have a rant about her somewhere around here.... Found it! So, basically, I found the characters flat and sort of annoying, and the two I read, My Sister's ...

"Cold and Broken": The point of Bella is that she could be any of us. She's the kind of person who would read this kind of book. I liked Twilight ...

is it about when someone feels intimidated by you dont know why? Uh, that's not what I got from it, but I suck at poetry (Next year's English teacher spazzes ...

1) Paramore is da shizz. 2) This was awfully repetitive. Repeating and REPHRASING your topic is fine, but not a word-for-word carbon copy of a sentence. 3) It needs to ...

Would it really kill you to say "worse"? What, pray tell, could that possibly add? Same for having a "fuck", "shit", "ass", or "bitch" every other line. I don't have ...

Well, I had a whole crit planned, only to find that St. R pretty much said it all. I am extremely offended and will be fighting her later. Anyway. The ...

In the future, make sure you've formatted it properly - with spaces in between paragraphs. signalled signaled. The guards carried her limp body up the gallows and placed her on ...

I agree with AmeliaOliver about nothing being a real surprise. I guessed Snape's allegiance (though not the other bit about him. So fanfic.), and I guessed that something of the ...

The heap was It was She was lifted up Ack! Passivity! (Um, if passivity is an actual word and my spell check isn't just on drugs. You never know.) It ...

Disappear The couch wrapped her in a comfy embrace. It snuggled against her bare shoulders. With her legs curled beneath her, and her long hair splayed across the armrest, she ...

Late at night (well, actually it's 9:36, but my stepmother was banging pots around way too early this morning...grrr...), the solid block of text is absolute evil. So are the ...

Oh my. I started this the other day, and by page 21 I was throwing up. Not for plot, or character, or voice reasons. The author could be a perfectly ...

I know it's illegal. but. I HATE Jodi Picoult, mostly because her characters are flat as tile. She's sort of the anti-Stephenie Meyer. Sure, the concept is interesting and all, ...