User avatar

PurpleShade

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Reassurance

    I, like my predecessor, am confused. If this was a poem, it was a confusing one, in no real format of any kind, and it felt more like you were ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Collectors (Part 1)

    This is very interesting. Not enough is known or written about the dryad culture, and I think you've done well. The main character is likable, but imperfect. Although perhaps it's ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Don't Forget

    Interestinnnng... Hello. :D I love that this story has a lot of possibilities right from the start. I can't know exactly who the main characters are, (but there's enough there ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Little Friendly Competition

    Hehe, hi there. The sheer length of this makes it difficult to critique. I think... I'm not sure what to say, actually. I think the problem is that I find ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: No longer a poem!

    Well hi there; I'm thinking... this will be a short review, for a short but sweet poem. Nitpicks first! And intensions can be set aside. Intentions, right? I think yes. ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Animus

    Halloo there; I have a few comments... I know I'm new here, so don't take anything I say the wrong way, I hope I don't come across as arrogant or ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What Sarah Said

    Oh my goodness. This was very stirring. I have to admit, of course, I only began to read it because the title had "Sarah" in it, and that's my name, ...

    Aug 12, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Another Chance

    Hallo... My first review ever! I'm nervous. First of all, I liked this piece. At first I thought it was a little over-indulgent, just a lot of "love loss pain ...

    Aug 12, 2011


I am proud of my self, the reason why some of you might disagree with me a little with, but nevertheless I still proud.
— Oxara