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Re: Reassurance
I, like my predecessor, am confused. If this was a poem, it was a confusing one, in no real format of any kind, and it felt more like you were ...
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Re: The Collectors (Part 1)
This is very interesting. Not enough is known or written about the dryad culture, and I think you've done well. The main character is likable, but imperfect. Although perhaps it's ...
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Re: Don't Forget
Interestinnnng... Hello. :D I love that this story has a lot of possibilities right from the start. I can't know exactly who the main characters are, (but there's enough there ...
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Re: A Little Friendly Competition
Hehe, hi there. The sheer length of this makes it difficult to critique. I think... I'm not sure what to say, actually. I think the problem is that I find ...
Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: No longer a poem!
Well hi there; I'm thinking... this will be a short review, for a short but sweet poem. Nitpicks first! And intensions can be set aside. Intentions, right? I think yes. ...
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Re: Animus
Halloo there; I have a few comments... I know I'm new here, so don't take anything I say the wrong way, I hope I don't come across as arrogant or ...
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Re: What Sarah Said
Oh my goodness. This was very stirring. I have to admit, of course, I only began to read it because the title had "Sarah" in it, and that's my name, ...
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Re: Another Chance
Hallo... My first review ever! I'm nervous. First of all, I liked this piece. At first I thought it was a little over-indulgent, just a lot of "love loss pain ...
Aug 12, 2011
