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Re: Let me cry
First of all, great job. This poem is really powerful, obviously written with lots of emotion behind it. It makes me ask questions, which is a really good thing for ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: Where Would I Be?
Wow. Just wow. I think that this is a really powerful song. I love everything about it, honestly. The verses have meaning, and beauty, and the chorus makes me want ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: Happiness
This is amazing! You expect us to.. "tear it apart", but I, personally believe that you've captured the feeling perfectly, because I mean, what is happiness? Happiness IS simplicity. It's ...
Dec 7, 2011 -
Re: Blue as the Sea
You have beautiful dreams. There was ice everywhere. As soon as she peeked around the doorway into the dark corridor beyond, all she was greeted with was ice. There was ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Masks
This is awesome! Are you professional? Seriously, this is great. An island I built, to hold myself, A lofty height, a dusty shelf. I travel light, across the rainy planes, ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: I Know Something You Don't Know
This makes me smile, but at the same time it makes me want to scream and cry and rant. I think this is how I feel a lot. It sounds ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Eisoptropolis
First of all, let me say I love your signature, more specifically the Bilbo Baggins quote. My sister and I say that when we enter big parties XD XD XD. ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: It seems like...
This strikes me somehow. It seems sad, but in a positive way. Like the sad of your first child getting married. But It really is positive, and that may be ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Breakup
you met a dude that said he liked me by the door's... You fighted with him about how i was yours... I sat in the middle of both of you. ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: Him
I love this. You capture my feelings so perfectly it freaks me out a little. I know the exact feeling of passing that perfect awesome super mega foxy awe some ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: Oh My Love
I do like this a lot, but since I have a grammar Nazi sister, I have to fix this. Make it believe that you ' r e true, I know ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Country Boy: Chapter 1, part 1
I didn't really read it, but you're my sister and I wanted to tell you about the first day of school. The choir room is different, Mr. VanDyke got a ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: The Fate I Never Chose
It's a bit long for my taste, but it wasn't boring like most really long ones I read. It was enjoyable, (in a sad way) through the whole thing, and ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: A Moment of Flight
This is amazing! Great job. I especially liked the second stanza. But oh no - what's this? Something's pulling you down To the earth, to the gravel, To the grass, ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Heavenly Dark
I rather like this. The rhyme scheme is wonderful, most of these don't rhyme, so yours is now officially in my good books. Sometimes black, And sometimes white. But always ...
Aug 17, 2011
