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Re: God Took My Car, and I Can't Get That Hunky Crap Out Anymore: A Poem
I legit forgot this was posted. My apologies. Actually, the speaker is me. Thank you for the criticism, though. I appreciate it.
Jan 24, 2025 -
Re: An City Which Now Screams Black (Sequel to The Ocean That Crackled Red)
But for context, Danella was the receptionist.
Aug 11, 2024 -
Re: An City Which Now Screams Black (Sequel to The Ocean That Crackled Red)
I just saw this. Thank you for your feedback. I am currently working on descriptions and overall mood now, but an lot of things still need to be polished. And ...
Aug 11, 2024 -
Re: An City Which Now Screams Black (Sequel to The Ocean That Crackled Red)
I am not yet sure if there will be an conclusion, or if I'll just add on to the story. The first two came to me fast, but I don't ...
Aug 6, 2024 -
Re: The Ocean That Crackled Red
And btw, I did actually finish the sequel. But its not so much an life lesson and more nasty body horror related. An lot longer, too. If you can, using ...
Aug 2, 2024 -
Re: Space Crazy : Prologue - Abducted By Aliens
You are so welcome!
Aug 2, 2024 -
Re: The Ocean That Crackled Red
Thank you for your review! And for an bit of an spoiler, he isn't really an ocean force. Since his arrival in Louisiana, he has been trained and pretty much ...
Jul 23, 2024 -
Re: The Ocean That Crackled Red
Hey. Thank you for such the nice review. I am happy you are putting your reviewing skills to good use! It's been an while since I written much of an ...
Jul 23, 2024 -
Re: Precious in Wonderland, Not So Much Instead (Comeback for 2024)
How so? How did I take it on that called to you? But I always loved Alice in Wonderland sort of because I just like to imagine I'm Alice and ...
Jul 9, 2024 -
Re: I Am Genesis (that one piece that I need to rewrite)
Hey there. Sorry for being so inactive but I have recently revisited this piece and I will be rewriting it with a little more length and backstory to it. My ...
May 10, 2022 -
Re: I Am Genesis (that one piece that I need to rewrite)
Thanks for the review! I'm planning on making Sisters of Genesis a lot better than I Am Genesis. It may be published on my YWS blog but idk if that ...
Oct 22, 2021 -
Re: I Am Genesis (that one piece that I need to rewrite)
Thanks for the review!
Sep 27, 2021 -
Re: I'm Not Planning On Finishing This Because My Attention Span Is Bad
This is what happens when you write on a whim kids.
Jun 9, 2021 -
Re: Gone
Hey guys! I'm back from my long hiatus and I wanna say that this work is really old and ever since I wrote this I continued to write more short ...
Jun 9, 2021 -
Re: i know why it's raining
Hello there LordMomo! I really like your works and i wanted to give a little short review on this piece of poetry. The only thing i can say is that ...
Dec 5, 2020
