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oh, I forgot to add on the repost. NOTE: This galaxy has had contact with the Star Wars one. Oopies... :oops:

Gracias, Kitty! I shall fix it..but first I think that I'll wait for other to comment too. ~Timea

Ok. Now as I'm reading over the other comments: I TOTALLY agree with Sumi! Sumi and Dynamo are both total geniuses and they are both right!! Why did you write ...

Hey, it sounds good! I think the name 'Darc' is a bit too much pun. (It's kinda hard to crit a prologue) But it sounds great, and I'll read it! ...

What do you mean...'i know zat means'? :smt049 :smt049 Timea

I've already critted this i won't repeat. Anywho, everyone go read my story!! Very muchy connected to Z's. :smt016

Really? I've never, ever seen it used like that? ~Timea

And Jabber, it's like 7 years before the story I'm writing now starts. :D :D ~Timea

Sounds great, Zoltan. ~Your Sis

Thank you all for posting! I posted this chapter so fast, all I did was type it, and then post it! I didn't have time to proof-read! I'm so sorry, ...

I have used your suggestion, Shadow. I really like it :D. ~Timea

haha!

Well, I just fixed some of the grammar stuff! Hope it sounds better! ~Timea

Ok. Thanks everyone so far for your comments. I'm going to try to fix the grammar up when i have time. As for the abbreviations like 'docs', that stands for ...

no problem! 8) :D ~Rogue Jedi Master Timea