PsyLynx

Whenever I try to write smart poetry, it turns out crappy...yeah. Poetry, even anti-poetry poetry, has to be inspired, and this just wasn't. You know what I mean.

Somewhere between cute for a third grader to write and lame. Sorry... :cry:

Very lovely. I am not really commenting, I'm just appreciating. Sorry for my selfishness.

Sense is only for those who have not yet touched the well's bottom, and perhaps this was not written for anyone else.

And you leave out the most valuable part about it, which is that it's about me.

Lovely. I think it should go deeper, vision of it was definitely influenced and thus slightly changed by the similarities to Mr. Tambourine Man.

I love it...the conversion from melancholy, sad slight-depression to...love. MMmmmmyeah. Thanks, it is an excellent piece.

loved it. It seemed to be very mature, and like it was worked on a lot, without any of it being taken away in the process. Very well done.

absolutely hilarious.

I think that you need a hug. *Hugs you*

comments from someone, anyone? Please?

I wrote this while falling asleep with my eyes closed, and my favorite color is orange I think.

it seemed trite to me...really trite...but I can't help you out, so I'm a turd for telling you that, sorry. Do better, because you can.

I haven't actually read it (at least not yet) but the title you have is absolutely awesome; I hope you don't change it.

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