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Re: Ying Yang, Inverted
I do believe that it was intentional, but thanks for questioning that something that's cool came out of my mind....lol. Most of the best things I've written have happened on ...
Aug 30, 2005 -
Re: The Only Truly Great Poem I Will Ever Write
this is also an in-joke, for those rare fools who lived it with me.
Aug 30, 2005 -
Re: The Only Truly Great Poem I Will Ever Write
just know that it is inspired on a true story
Aug 30, 2005 -
Re: Innocent
I GET REVENGE ON THE UNIVERSE! See, I once wrote a poem entitled My Child, and people's big complaint with it was that I repeated My Child too much, well...same ...
Aug 29, 2005 -
Re: Shadows
I'm sorry, I have to state that I think it wasn't too great....nothing for my imagination to latch onto, man...I WANT IMAGERY AND RHYTHM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Aug 29, 2005 -
Re: Me-You Night angels
I don't believe in science-art.
Jul 20, 2005 -
Re: Broken Dreams
I seem to recall this....you told me on the phone, I doth recalleth. And I love: While my mind is twitching with eccentricity *twitch twitch*
Jul 16, 2005 -
Re: Tears of the Unforgiven
I like it much more than your other one....some of this feels a little repetitive...I think you should cut between three and five lines, you choose which, and it would ...
Jul 8, 2005 -
Re: Between Two Suns
perfect, man, thanks a bunch. It's very very beautiful and deep.
Jul 8, 2005 -
Re: Peom! Peom! Peom! <--- notice the spelling error.
Totally funny, man. :lol:
Jul 8, 2005 -
Re: a depressing poem i felt like writing for once.
I like it, but I think it's too that, by the end, you get used to the style and it doesn't feel new or exciting anymore, but just predictable...I think ...
Jul 6, 2005 -
Re: blissful concerto
oh god, musical (good musical) poetry, and lots of it....perfect. Don't change anything.... I say "oh god, musical poetry" because it can be sooooooooooooo cool....man. Thanks. A
Jul 6, 2005 -
Re: heavenly graffiti
completely wonderful...timeless (in my mind...I suppose acid rain isn't timeless, but whatevs, this piece feels timeless). And it's really, truly beautiful and great. A
Jul 6, 2005 -
Re: Racing Within the Surf of Spazming Stars, arbitrary part one
oh, and though I don't think that I get into it in this part, though I might, spazming stars don't actually exist, I just like the concept. If I don't ...
Jul 4, 2005 -
Re: Exquisite
I can't think of anything to change, it's absolutely funderful.
Jul 3, 2005
