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PsyLynx

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)

    but you did actually read the thing and comment on it and think, so thanks. A lot.

    Dec 6, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)

    You really don't understand it. It is self-indulgent, purely. And it all makes sense, every part of it, because it is all true.

    Dec 6, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Santa Clause is God (and it's a myth that he gives coal)

    hmmm, you remind me of someone I know....

    Dec 6, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Santa Clause is God (and it's a myth that he gives coal)

    it's all about it, man. God is a nice guy who gives you everything. There is no coal. Other people give the coal, and God isn't really a guy, but ...

    Dec 5, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Northern Lights (Haiku)

    fucking sweet!

    Dec 4, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: December 14th

    fantastic chevy! I really like it, it's...pretty and short and shit.

    Dec 4, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Take me

    I like it. It's pretty and short and has good rhythm.

    Dec 4, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)

    any advice, Chevy?

    Dec 3, 2005
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)

    I also took away a lot...most of the first part was removed, and I'm currently undecided whether I like it more or not. It's different.

    Dec 3, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Apocalyptic Smush

    this felt like a classic, a lot like one. It was flavorful, had new and cool language used naturally, had a nostalgia and a beauty all it's own. Congrats, yo.

    Dec 2, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In The Cold

    that is absolutely beautiful...very complex, great images, just....mmmm! Like a snowflake only not cold, or really like a snowflake, except in it's temperature which was cold. nvm, I liked it.

    Dec 1, 2005
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blue Eyed Boy

    um, no. I didn't like it, it was just....sigh. I want images and metaphors and a story, not just talking, not just talking talking talking.

    Dec 1, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Cool Memories I

    I really like it a lot. Good job.

    Dec 1, 2005
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: keep still

    I love this, I'm bookmarking it. it's yummy.

    Nov 30, 2005
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Too Beautiful

    I can definitely relate. Like it a lot.

    Nov 24, 2005


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