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Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)
but you did actually read the thing and comment on it and think, so thanks. A lot.
Dec 6, 2005 -
Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)
You really don't understand it. It is self-indulgent, purely. And it all makes sense, every part of it, because it is all true.
Dec 6, 2005 -
Re: Santa Clause is God (and it's a myth that he gives coal)
hmmm, you remind me of someone I know....
Dec 6, 2005 -
Re: Santa Clause is God (and it's a myth that he gives coal)
it's all about it, man. God is a nice guy who gives you everything. There is no coal. Other people give the coal, and God isn't really a guy, but ...
Dec 5, 2005 -
Re: Northern Lights (Haiku)
fucking sweet!
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: December 14th
fantastic chevy! I really like it, it's...pretty and short and shit.
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: Take me
I like it. It's pretty and short and has good rhythm.
Dec 4, 2005 -
Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)
any advice, Chevy?
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: Schizm (real poem--apologies for the first)
I also took away a lot...most of the first part was removed, and I'm currently undecided whether I like it more or not. It's different.
Dec 3, 2005 -
Re: Apocalyptic Smush
this felt like a classic, a lot like one. It was flavorful, had new and cool language used naturally, had a nostalgia and a beauty all it's own. Congrats, yo.
Dec 2, 2005 -
Re: In The Cold
that is absolutely beautiful...very complex, great images, just....mmmm! Like a snowflake only not cold, or really like a snowflake, except in it's temperature which was cold. nvm, I liked it.
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Blue Eyed Boy
um, no. I didn't like it, it was just....sigh. I want images and metaphors and a story, not just talking, not just talking talking talking.
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: Cool Memories I
I really like it a lot. Good job.
Dec 1, 2005 -
Re: keep still
I love this, I'm bookmarking it. it's yummy.
Nov 30, 2005 -
Re: Too Beautiful
I can definitely relate. Like it a lot.
Nov 24, 2005
