Prosithion

I liked your poem a lot, but there were a few problems. The rythm was a little choppy and didn't flow. Your rhymes were good, but the beat was off ...

I thought that it was good, but you don't like men much do you? I would assume that this is a fantasy story because of all the weird names the ...

I have never listened to TOOL in my life, so yes, I have no idea what you're talking about. But It seems good so I don't have to comment on ...

What on Earth was that? It definitely wasn't poetry. I'd have to agree with Inertia. There are major issues with this poem. I't take it back to the writing desk ...

I liked it. Personally, I like Yes and Genesis, but everyone's entitled to their own opinion. :D Megan. You've actually read The Hobbit. Cool. :)

I think that that was a wonderful screenplay and you should go ahead with it. There are people looking for stuff like that. I have only one question. Why do ...

It was good. "A deafening silence" is actually very good. I think that there were some rythem problems, but other than that, I thought that it was very good. :D