Prosithion

I agree with Imp, though this was really well written. I liked the rhyming and I feel that this is the sort of poem I'd write. I like that you ...

I thought that the poem was good, but there didn't seem to be a rhyme scheme at all. It also is kind of a topic that's been done to death. ...

uh... it was very very good, but I have a question. Did you write it? If so, very good. I liked the feeling it got across and I like how ...

I saw all three Matrix's, and yours is a wondeful parody. I thought that it was hilarious, and shows that you have a wonderful imagination. nice story :D :wink: I ...

I absolutely loved this poem. It conveyed a deep meaning, and I like that. It makes the poems or stories so much better. It makes the writer put a lot ...

It was very good, but it seems like it was a school paper. Try to make it a little more conversational. This might make more people read it. I have ...

I wuld have to agree with everything that IceCreamMan said. I really enjoyed teh story otherwise and felt that you described everything very well. ( I'm a stickler for description.) ...

It was good, but a little too sureal. It was sort of weird. If there aren't animals and stuff, why is there a butterfly? Other than that, I thoguht it ...

It was good, but you don't like rhyming and rhythm do you? In the beginning, themselves should be himself or herself depending. Other than that, it was very good. :)

As Zanyplebeian said, this was very complex. It was sort of hard to understand. but I liked it anyway. Very good job :D :D

First of all, I have no idea who John Keats was and second, I have no idea what that story was. I didn't get it at all. Please explain it ...

Oh my God. What was going on. I don't understand what happened at all. This script you're going to have to explain, because I didn't get it at all. :?: ...

I thought that was very good. You got your point across and did it in a very neat way. I congratulate you and think that was a wonderful poem. Great ...

Sorry to say it, but your play was very confusing. The lights up and down and the constant seat change made the story hard to follow. You might want to ...

I thought that this was good. It seems as if you were trying to get across something that happened to you. Whatever it was, I think that it was a ...