PrincessOfDarkness

OoORedrumOoO, It isn't actually a real story- it was purley imagination. :) I do know what it's like to lose a fanily member though, so I guess that's why. Thankyou ...

Thanks for the reviews Guys! :) Love you all. xD

Short and Sweet! This is gorgeous! It flowed wonderfully, and I loved the idea. Keep it up!

Ermm ... are'nt you in the wrong catagory? Otherwise, I loved it! It was great!!!

Yeah, like I said before, it was something I did for my little sister (who is 6) so the dialouge was just a laugh, and I wanted the dialoge in ...

Thanks! It was more of a fictional story, and as you said, I'm adding more of the descriptions and characters in later. :D I added in all this talk because ...

You needed to add a comma, and capitalize Mommy and Daddy, and 'pedals' should be 'petals'. :D Otherwise, it was great!!!

Same!!!!!!! xD

Aaaaah. I see. OK! I will see about changing that :D

Oh! I really like it! It flows, but I like the fact it is all in one. :D Keep Writing! Princess of Darkness Read Some Of My Stories! Poems!

Aaaah. I see what you mean. :D It was supposed to get faster paced, but how do you mean "Clear it up?" :D Yes, and I will beat you! Mwahahahahaha! ...

If you corrected some errors, this would be good. But I think it needs more detail.

Other things amazing about this book: 1. Yes, it's not at all short, but that's done for a reason. While reading these 500+ pages, you really get to love its ...

!!! I don't know if anyone else will agree, but you sound like Max! It's really good! :D

OK. I'll set the scene. You are starving. You really, really, REALLY want a jam sandwhich, but, HORROR OF HORRORS: The Strawberry Jam is all gone! :O But, you root ...