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Re: The Silhouette of the Palm Tree
I really like this poem! I think you captured the image perfectly in your poem, it was really good! It feels as if, we are dancing in midair, spiralling, laughing, ...
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: Midnight (Part 2)
Like! Like! Like! I have no nit-picks! This was truly awesome! I loved it all! Please PM as soon as Part 3 is out! The countryside was a blur to ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Stardust
I love this poem, and unfortunatly for me, I can relate to it. A lot. :( I am reminded that you're my best friend, that you don't like me back. ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: LoZ: the Golden Pendant (1.2)
Ooooh! This is really good! xD I loved it. She pulled her horse to a stop again when the mounted warrior who had rescued her ... ... crashed through the ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: Fragile soul or Indifferent mind?
I loved this poem! I love the darkness to it (See my screen name)... my kind of poem... I like reading them, but I just can't write them. o.O Got ...
Jul 4, 2011 -
Re: I Can Tell When I'm Not Wanted
Oh, I disagree! I think it did have emotion! I thought it was really good! I think you could improve the grammar (missed a few commas, full stops) at times, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: And the Light Fades (chapter 4 part 1)
The rumbling is back again, it’s not just the wind that is keeping from me from hearing the words that are hanging in the air behind me. Tremulously the ground ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Water Under The Bridge Chapter Nine: Lacey
October, 1997 “Happy Birthday Anna Faith!” I plant a kiss in her baby fine hair, as she smears through the icing on her cupcakes. I quickly grab the candles, before ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Illusions
This pit I fell into, That seems like it will never end, If you can't see it there, Must all be an illusion. I'm just wondering: Is the last line ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: No Witnesses
I liked your story, but the ending to me, was obvious. It just becasue I've read so many books I just knew from the first line/paragraph: The helicopters blades whirled, ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Book Thief
I was scrolling down reviews and saw: "Book Theif" Someone else has read it! :D WOW! IT IS A MUST READ. I LOVE IT! I CRIED SO MUCH! IF YOU ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Soul Supplier
I really like this! Can't fault it. I can't see any spelling or grammar mistakes, but I read fast, but I also skim read. :) Well Done! Keep it up!
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Child's Death
WOW! *Hits like button repeatedly* Blue sky's Green grass The perfect time in which to bask.
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Cycles Of Agony
This is a very moving, meaningful poem. is the last sentance a question or not? Just wondering, because when I write a question without a question mark everyones like "QUESTION ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: Kindred
This is really good! I really like it! I felt I could really connect to it- I have a younger sister, and that is exactly how I feel for her, ...
Jun 23, 2011