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Hello Jericho , Pretzel here for a review of your work, as was requested by your friend Lareine. Anyways, let's get straight into it, shall we? A skill that you ...

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This is exactly me ^^

Thank you! I'm trying my best to not make it cookie-cutter but more natural. Still experimenting but I think that RED and TeamTortoise is a great opportunity to adjust.

Thank you! ^^ I knew that there was something off with the second and fourth stanza, I just couldn't identify it.

Thank you! you don't even know how many words I had to cut out to publish this, because I don't really like my poems to be lengthy at all. ^^ ...

It's interested that you said your interpretation. But yes, I did have a completely different thing in mind while writing it. Thank you for sharing!

I'll remove that o' since it was meant to be translated as an "oh". Thank for your pointing that out, as I was on the fence there about it!

Aww, that just made my day ;) thanks for noticing my intentions. YAY!

Thank you! I don't know if you noticed, but I almost wanted the words in italics to connect and kind of make a statement. Just something new that I decided ...

No problem. Only 26 more chapters to go ;) Hope I helped you.

Go do it!

To Chrissy: *not* You might have been on mobile though, so I understand how mobile spellcheck can be a pain.

*helpful* If you write it on Google Docs you will have auto spelling correct.

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