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Hi, pretzelsing here, doing your promised review. I will try to keep the tips that you had in mind and be and have a critical eye while reading.I am jumping ...

Okay, heya satira, this is pretzelsing here for a review: First of all I promise not to nitpick but here are my points that I want to touch Here is ...

Hello,pretzelsing here for a review, I really the sense of anticipation in your whole story. It was warriors waiting before a battle mood and I personally liked it.Here are my ...

Hello, this is pretzelsing here for a review, I really liked the air of uncertainty that your writing had. Eona was unsure doing the whole story and you showed that ...

Hi,pretzelsing here for a review I like this story,although I was totally reading it out of context so I am just warning you about that. I generally thought that your ...

Hello this is pretzelsing here for a review, a friend of your sister, ThereseCricket Throughout this book, you build up suspense that lasts throughout the whole chapter. You had me ...

Hello, pretzelsing here for a review, Overall, I liked how you wrote this story from two different and opposite perspectives of the twins. I will nitpick but I also want ...

Okay,hi this is pretzelsing, I like how throughout this story there was suspense that filled it but I am also seeing some minor and major problems and mistakes so I ...

Hello,pretzelsing here for a review,! I jumped into the middle of the story so this story is out of context and a little bit confusing to me but please just ...

Hello, pretzelsing here for a review, I really truly liked this chapter of your story. I have not been following your book or the general plot line events so I ...

Hello this is pretzelsing for a review here: I have a question, I think that this time span is too short. During one week Adonia already feels well enough to ...

Hello pretzelsing here for a review of your chapter 2, I really liked your story and how you showed Adonia's depression, gradually throughout this story. I agree with the others, ...

Hi pretzelsing here for a review, Hello,I was recommended by a friend of mine to do your third chapter, because it was lonely and had only one review. Overall, I ...

Hello, this is pretzelsnow here for a review: I really liked the descriptive lines in this paragraphs. Here are a couple good and bad things that I noticed: In this ...

Hello this is pretzelsing here for a review(I changed my username, I am the former pretzelsnow) I really like the suspense here in this story.I was literally holding my breath ...