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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The light does

    Yay! I personally love to encourage and support writer/poets with dabbling their first time every in poetry. Because after all, I was in that place not so long ago and ...

    Sep 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (3)

    yo Skins! And I'm here again this lovely review day! I think that this chapter was again another one of those extremely funny ones that were kinda a necessary filler, ...

    Apr 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (2)

    Hello Skins, here to catch up with the novel. wow, there are so many things happening here, I mean, it's hard for my brain to wrap around them sometimes. Anyways, ...

    Mar 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Post-perpetual - III (rewritten)

    Hello Hiraeth. So here to write a review. Sorry that I'm a little bit behind. Since I've read the previous two reviews, I'll try my best not to repeat anything ...

    Mar 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: A Pocket Full of Posies (1)

    Skins, I finally have the pleasure of reading something that you wrote. Yay! Now, let's get straight into the review, shall we? Talking to dead people, pretty neat idea, I ...

    Mar 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Luneset 01OLD OUTAKES

    Audy: So, this story really drew me in, like into a fantasy world. I am an absolute fangirl for life, and what I specifically liked is that you had some ...

    Mar 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Freedom

    Hello felistia, Thank you for giving me the pleasure of reading this poem, and it really did flow very well I feel like. The imagery that you used here was ...

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 2]

    Hello Lightsong, Pretzel here. I read this next part of your work because of the cliffhanger in the last one and also that I genuinely wanted to read on and ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Post-perpetual - Interlude

    Hello Hiraeth, Pretzel here for a review of this next chapter of your intriguing novel. It seems like everytime that I reviewed is for a Review Day, but maybe we ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Literary Dalliance [Part 1]

    Hello Lavvie Hepburn, Pretzel here for a review. This was such a beautiful piece, because I think that you really described the power of reading and of books, and it ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 5.1

    Hello Noelle, you're telling me to rip this up? Well, I'll try ripping it up for R.E.D. at least, enough so that you can get some feedback and praise. Again, ...

    Feb 23, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 1]

    Hello Lightsong , Pretzel here! I know that I said that I would write your review today, and I fully plan to. Anyways, thank you for requesting from my thread, ...

    Feb 19, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Sad morning

    Hello Lima , welcome to YWS! Pretzel here for a review. Disclaimer: This review is pretty harsh so read as you will. The first thing that really threw me off ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: In the Absence of Stars - 1.1

    Hello Jericho , Pretzel here for a review of your work, as was requested by your friend Lareine. Anyways, let's get straight into it, shall we? A skill that you ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Spiritual, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 1: Revelations

    Hello SkarletteRose Pretzel here for a review, and I honestly have to say that this is going to be a pretty harsh review, so read at your own caution. First ...

    Feb 14, 2016


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
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