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Re: It’s been a long day (Kyle’s POV)
hiya! i'll be using a review template today ! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know my interpretation is that Kyle and Ben are close friends walking home after school, ...
Jun 18 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 4: The Message)
hiya, i'm trying a review template ! since you mentioned this is a middle chapter with no context, i tried to read it with that in mind and not get ...
Jun 17 -
Re: Attack
this story is very intense because it makes the migraine attack feel terrifying instead of just saying it hurt. i struggle with them too, so i get it. the descriptions ...
Jun 17 -
Re: Believing Without Research, Judging Without Empathy: The Logic of Online Life
this essay honestly makes a really good point about how people online believe stuff way too fast and act like they know the whole story after seeing one post. i ...
Jun 17 -
Re: Stay up
zomg, fnaf! i love fnaf! i like how you've written William as tired and restless but also ambitious in a scary way. you can tell he likes working at Fredbear’s ...
Jun 16 -
Re: Ilna - Prologue
i thought this was actually pretty cool because it starts off sounding like it’s just about a seed, but then it turns into something way darker. the way the tree ...
Jun 16 -
Re: All roads lead to Larkspur
this scene is pretty interesting because it shows how poppy is dealing with everything that happened in larkspur. the way she suddenly ends up back there makes the story feel ...
Jun 16
