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Re: Hidden Flame: A dragon's secret Chapter 3 pt.1
First off I really like this is it a novel ( yeah I think it is). I didn't get to read the whole think but I stopped off at “What’re ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Hidden Illusions Chapter 2
I want to start off by saying I just love the story like as I read on an on I was drawn in. I like the way you can draw ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Blank, Part 1
First of I want to start by saying nice poem. Now here are two questions I have for you 1. Why is it called blank? 2.Where did you get the ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: Elaana; Chapter 2
Mrs. Heart, or Trela, finished as Mr. Heart, Derekk, put his hands on her stomache, where Lana’s brother slept inside her womb. He sighed for this new life he was ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Diamond Fist: Chapter 2
“Soon,” he hissed, “there will be no doctors. There will be nothing. You will ruin the thousands of years of civilisation–” “What a foolish idea of me to promote you ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Pandora's Brush
The brush rose from the bathroom floor and levitated in mid air, then each of its bristles began to transfigure into human fibers. Soon it whirled violently and turned everything ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Dream Big
Is A Bird It should have been as a bird but I just love it it is so good my favorite part was when you said. Dream Big Open Your ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Wish You Were Mine
Sometimes I see you in my dreams Don't know what it all means, But I just say just continue dreaming Somewhere I see you in the stars You's think it's ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Withering Love
No it was not confusing at all I loved it and I really hope you will keep it up my Favorite part is.Till the morning dawn breaks, and his soul ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Moment of Truth
'Oh, God, dear God, I promise..' They all do the same, after the results are given out how many still pray to God's name? That is my favorite part keep ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Forgotten Domain
I followed you and I really liked this. I hope you get a lot of likes and I was the first to like you so I am happy I was ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
Now to start off I was a little confused at the first part. But then I read it over and I started to get what you were saying. I really ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: The Knife of Never Letting Go
:D My sister read read that book she said it was good 8) I have not read it yet but I will not because I really don' want to right ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
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I love this poem it was great.I can't believe you wrote this. I am so proud I just love it. There was some spelling mistakes like IDont and Iil But ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: deleted
As though my flesh was the only thing you could smell Other than that I don't thing you had any more mistakes I just loved this poem and the name ...
Jul 28, 2011
