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I sincerely apologize for this double post, a general error occurred and I had to reload the page, hence double posting.

A very heartfelt and sad story of a lost little brother. I liked this very much. One of the only nit picks I had was your continuation of sentences on ...

Haha, hilarious. Their isn't much to say, I love your style, your word choice, and your theme. The only thing I would point out is that the transition from satire ...

....wow....see I didn't even know half of the words to Invictus, I didn't even know it was called Invictus. Anyway thanks for the advice

this helped. The only thing I disagree with you on is how much I borrowed. I borrowed 5 lines out of 20 and even then the weren't really the same. ...

indeed ;)

bro, what are you doing?

aw christ, this was on abortion?

oh my god I love trolls on this site. Their all so petty x3

yeah I dot this to my teachers to. Sorry Night, I just suck at writing reviews, whenever I try to do them I cant resist adding something I believe to ...

Unless your doing stanzas, I don't believe poems use punctuation. Either that or it is optional. Thanks so much for reviewing :) can you please give me examples of what ...

;3; I cri everytime ;3; I wuv dis poem, so melancholy and simple, I love the fact that you can say so much with such a simplistic poem

tumultuous *chews on poem*

isn't is already a song? He has the link up top right?

Te caps. IT buuuuuurns. nah jk, but I suggest try formatting a little more, reading a block of writing is kinda boring