Poobos

This is a difficult subject to write about, but you've pulled it off pretty well. It authentically conveys the experience of someone trying to cope with a friend entering a ...

Hi, I haven't got anything to say about the first half itself, but I did start wondering whilst reading the water scene: how does Akira move? I mean, take walking ...

I see what you're doing here. James John Daniels dies just as he starts writing the story, and it happens to be about himself dying whilst starting a story, so ...

I heard someone was looking for harsh reviews? To be honest, it is very difficult to give a 'harsh' review, because this series has been brilliant so far. But, for ...

Hi. This is good. Actually, it's excellent for something written in five minutes(!), but other than that it was not especially remarkable. But then, nobody should expect to write a ...

Hi. Very nice! This was very simple, yet elegant as a result. I'm not sure whether I'd count this as a short story (in the prosaic sense) or a poem, ...

Hey there. Overall I liked your story very much, it has a very nice fairy tale quality to it (the beginning, in particular, was somewhat reminiscent of George MacDonald's stories ...

This is pretty good. Your use of the first person and present simple tense is especially effective in producing an atmosphere that is eerie, lonely, suspenseful and subtly introspective (without ...