Pompadour

Thanks so much! :D I'll look over all the things you pointed out, definitely.

Thanks lostthought! This isn't my only work and I've written short stories as well. But this is something new I'm working on, and I'll be posting more later as well ...

Thanks for the review! :D

Thank you so much for the review! Actually, this is just a fragment of the first chapter, the rest of which I will be posting later. And I mean for ...

Hey Trudeau! Thanks for the review! And as to all those questions, they will be answered in the later part of this chapter. This is just the first part of ...

Thank you so much for reviewing!

Thanks! ^_^ How's the review coming along?

Thanks! I think I'll try that out someday, and I really appreciate the review!

Thanks so much! ^_^

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Oops. I didn't realize I posted this. I was meant to save this as a draft and it's still incomplete. Heh. I'm removing this and will repost it when it's ...

I meant for this poem to be just "pretty images" actually. That's what it was, instead of having a strong purpose. It's kind of lyrical. But I've written other non-rhyming ...

Hi, Hannah! =D Yeah, the last few verses were kind of forced, but I've tried editing them, and I hope they're better! Actually, the imagery wasn't supposed to make sense. ...

Thanks so much! I actually couldn't think of a good title for this at all because it was so random and I just typed it down on a whim. I ...

Well, you could sort of show how, despite everything being opposite in the world (the lifestyle and stuff), human nature remains unchanged. It'd give a nice tang to the story. ...