Pompadour

For someone who got her braces tightened yesterday, man, this speaks so true. Also the dentist doesn't even give the older kids lollipops. I think it's criminal. >.>

I was feeling so terribly disappointed by the way this beginning turned out today. Your review made me feel so much better.

Ooh, sounds interesting. Yay for character development! ^^

I marked it as a review! It should show up now. :3 Thanks for the amazing review! :o I'll work on all them things now. Chapter 3 will come ... ...

YAY NEW STAR! So much blue. ^_^ Thank you for the lovely review.

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Hey, Wise! As promised, I'm here for the first chapter! Happy Review Day! Oohkay, so I really liked the way you began this chapter. It was very engaging, and also ...

You're back! :o Where have you beeeen? (Also thank you for the review! :D)

Ooh, also: I just noticed that 'Evelyn' in italics at the top of the chapter. *facepalms* I am so sorry--I thought it was a point of view. >.> No more ...

The reason I thought it wasn't a letter is because it doesn't start out as one, to be honest. I felt it could be a journal, and while I cottoned ...

It's about the minor Palestinian prisoners in Israel, being held in administrative detention--especially the ones from the Gaza Strip, who do not know why they're being detained. I was vague ...

Ah, no problemo, Jakey! I felt horrible for being so late, so I'm glad it was helpful. :) YES WRITE MOAR POETRY. XD

This is so freaking beautiful. That last stanza.

Indeedly you do. XD

Thanks for the review, Tim; it helped a ton! :D ("Tyres" is the way "tires" is spelled in British English.)