Pompadour

Thank you for the review! This helped a ton ^^

Thank you for the review! I'd meant to refer to the wind in a gender-neutral way, initially, but it looked and flowed oddly for me. 'She' is overused where the ...

Ahhh, I changed his name somewhere in the middle and forgot. XD His name is actually Thomas, though; thank you for catching that! Thaaank you for this. ^^ So many ...

I heard you're begging for reviews. When you say that I sound like a YWS fakir lol THANK YOU FOR THIS, SPARK, I NEEDED THIS

Thank you for this, Wolf! I completely agree that the description is too heavy; I'll get to editing it soon. ^^ I don't really think it's so much style than ...

I see. You're the best judge of your own poetry of course. You're welcome

I actually /did/ mean 'bisect' and 'locus'. XD But thank you for the review anyway!

Thank youu for this, fort!

Thank you for this so muches, fort! I wrote a wrong reply but YWS gobbled it up; we should talk interpretation some time. Also Auri

You're an absolute dear.

omg this is, like, old

You flatter me, but thaaaank you.

I DIDN'T GET A NOTIF FOR THIS. Thank you so much for your on-pointe, fab as usual review, Flamey! Hopefully, both Pascal and Rufus' actions will make more sense in ...

Capitalization is not a must in poetry; it's an artistic choice. I will look into those line-breaks and transitioning, though. Thanks for the review! ^^

I didn't get a notif for this. :o Thank you so much for the review, Sub!