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Re: I drew my name in chalk
Heya, Timmy! Here to review~ So, I'm taking a stab here and guessing--this is prose poetry, right? I'm not much of an expert when it comes to the "do"s and ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.2
Best. Chapter. Yet. No, seriously. I love how absolutely balanced this is; the atmosphere is absolutely perfect and I'm simply drinking in the description. I especially loved the way you ...
Jun 4, 2014 -
Re: I see the patience of Chinars in winter...
Here to review as requested! :D This is difficult to review, mainly because the imagery here is so freaking powerful. I know this has already been said, but not only ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: profundus lumen, lumen amplexus.
Hellooo, Jaimi! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I'm here to review now! That's quite a title you've got there. Latin? Google translates it to, "Deep light, light embrace." ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: A Matter Unusual: Prologue
Hey, Jared! Pompadour here to review this lovely piece for you~ Frankly speaking, I really think you could've just begun with the first chapter here instead of having a separate ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Another Side: Chapter 10
Hey! Pompadour here for a quick review~ Happy Review Day! Alright, I'll just cover the technicalities before moving on to the content. Fair warning: I haven't read the previous chapters. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 4.1
Yo, Deanie! I'm sorry this is so late. Lemme quickly run through the nit-picks and toss them aside so I'm free to gush about your chapter and stuff. Our group ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 3.3 (Edited)
Heya~ I'll just cover a few quick nitpicks and then get to the actual review, so hang tight. I knelt next to him as well putting a fist in my ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: Alone w/ Everyone: 1
Hey, QQ! Here for a quick review~ The light, it hurts my eyes as I open them up to the sun. The opening sentence could use a little work. It ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of the World-Chapter 2
Heya. Pompadour here to review for you~ Okay, so I skimmed through your previous chapter before my review, and I have a pretty good idea of the story, although it ...
May 20, 2014 -
Re: Flying in a different sky: Reviews Are Most Welcome :)
Hi, Anees! Pompadour here to review for you. Oh, and welcome to YWS! All right, so I'm reviewing as I read -- the second time, not the first -- and ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: Witch hunt
Hello, Fizz! Pompadour here to review for you! I love the fact that you've chosen witch-burning as a topic. I haven't come across poetry related to it on YWS as ...
May 19, 2014 -
Re: Chasing Nightfall Chapter 1: Daughters.
Hey! I'm on my phone so please excuse any typos/any other errors I might make! :D Many a midnight ago, when the wild chrysanthemums would bloom in radiant harmony and ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 3.2 (Edited)
Back again! The terrorists All righty, so one thing I noticed was that though you've mentioned these terrorists in the previous chapter as well, I can barely see them. I'm ...
May 18, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 3.1 (Edited)
Someone's been busy! Looks like I have some catching up to do. >.> Okay, so are you trying to make me cry? Because you, missy, are succeeding. Such an intense ...
May 16, 2014