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Re: Eyes Wide Shut 8.1
I'm back! And yes I'm late, but that's become a typical happening, right? *cough blameschool cough* Anywhoo, on with the review! :D Ayano and Mei had disappeared , along with ...
Aug 27, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 7.2
Hello, hello! I'm back.
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Little Girl
You wrote poetry oh my goodness I am so proud I've forgotten to punctuate this sentence properly. ;-; Ooh, it's nice seeing narrative poetry up here for a change! I ...
Aug 3, 2014 -
Re: Say Something
Hola, Timmy! Pompadour finally here to review as promised. I know this is very, very late but I'm going to make this quick, mainly because I have a lot to ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 1.0 Boy
Heyo, guys! Pompadour here to review as promised. So awfully sorry for the delay! Alright, so the first thing I noticed when I read the first few paras is that ...
Jul 29, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 7.1
Beanie! Pompadour here to review~ You know how I roll, so I'll spare you the preamble and get to business. Nitpicks! Every thing movement she made was so slow I ...
Jul 19, 2014 -
Re: I see a world through broken glass
Hey, Therese~ I don't think I've ever had the pleasure of reviewing any of your works, so I thought I'd drop by and leave a quick review on this one! ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Four
Hello! And I've finally caught up, yay! Alright, so I'm well into the second paragraph or so as I write this and one thing that I've noticed is that there ...
Jul 8, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Chen [Null]
Gah, I can't review this one either. Just a couple of grammar thingamabobbies and I'll be on my way. >.> However , whatever the streams, one thing is obvious. Insert ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Hutcheon [Null]
Hopefully I'll be of some more help here, eh? and being myself - not anti-social, nor shy - I still had no friends. You've mixed up hyphens with dashes here. ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Three
Hola! Once he had walked into my house and called my mother "Mom", while other times I had climbed through his bedroom window from the playground outside. This is awkward. ...
Jul 2, 2014 -
Re: Falling Deep- Chapter Two
Hezzo! You just can't get rid of me, can you? :P I had heard Ash’s crazed laughter Strange. I don't remember this. Switch back to the first chappie and tweak ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last: Ambulance
Heyo, Blackwood! Pompadour here for a short review~ Happy Review Day! Alright, so I'll admit that I haven't read any chapters preceding this one, but I shall backtrack as soon ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Love in the time of Curfew
Here to review as requested~ Happy Review Day! Alright, so before I begin, it's probably best to admit that--I cried, okay? This hit really hard, and it's absolutely beautiful. History ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Days Slip by Unnoticed
Hey, Timmy! Happy Review Day! Okay, so you honestly deserve all those likes up there, and if I'm honest then this is going to be really tough to critique. Simply ...
Jun 29, 2014
