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I wasnt quite sure about the bold text for Basselt, either. I did it cause it's inky black, and thought maybe it would kinda emphasize that it's a dark creature? ...

Hi! Thanks for the review! You're right about that sentence. Reading it now, it sounds so clunky the way it is, and your suggestion sounds way nicer. Thank you! I've ...

Dude, this is so helpful! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for the review! I'll fix the rating, and probably the title too. You're totally right. ...

Idk if you meant it to be as funny as it was, but I'm literally laughing out loud at you saying Ralys is unlikable. Hopefully it's a good idea, but ...

Thank you so much for the review, and the advice!!! I think I get what you're saying about adding all the description in between dialogue. I'll have to read back ...

Hey! I'm so glad you liked it!! Thank you for all the kind words. And for pointing out the thing about the door, I think you're totally right, and I'll ...

I'm laughing. This is such a kind and funny comment, thank you! If you're interested, I have chapter one of this story posted, as well as the first chapter of ...

I like poetry, but i'm not good enough at it to give a review haha. But this is really nice. I'm a really big fan of poems with this kind ...

No don't apologise at all! Grammar (punctuation specifically) isn't really my strong suit. I just kinda go through like, "hope this comma goes here!" lol So I really do appreciate ...

ah, I just read your reply to one of the previous reviews, that your goal was for the entire story to only be 10,000 words. With that in mind, I ...

Yeah I'll definitely post it!

Hi! Thank you for the review. It's really helpful, and I appreciate how in-depth you answered my questions. Not that I don't appreciate the other reviewers (trust me, I do, ...

aaah thank you so much for this review, it's very helpful! I've taken notes from all the reviews and will try and touch on and make these aspects better. I'm ...

Yeah, YWS likes to do that sometimes, haha! I'm really glad you liked the story. Thank you for the advice! I'm definitely going to give Fargo some background so she ...

Oops, haha! Scarily is supposed to be "shakily." My bad! I'll definitely fix that when I go back through it again. I'm glad you liked the story, and thank you ...