Poltergiest

I think everyone is gonna start posting stuff with spiolers, now. :D ~Pol

[spoiler] Rest in Peace, Lily, James, Mad-Eye, Hedwig, Fred, Dobby, Lupin, Tonks, and Dumbledore.[/spoiler] ~Pol

The Harry Potter series is what sparked my intrest. Before I was a stupid jock in the 6th grade, barely able to read. I decided, "Eh, why not." And started ...

Okay, now I've read the third part. It was good, like the rest. I think you should explain the shuttle bit a bit more. He could have tried to escape ...

Mmm... Cheerios... But really! Thnx for the crits. Its really hard to compose the perfect fight. I have it all in my head but its hard to tranfer that fast ...

Okay, this is after reading the second part. Again very good. Is it a flash back or are you gonna keep the story here? Only everyone else who's read it. ...

My favs are 3 and 7. 3 cause of the dementors and Sirious and stuff. 7 because of the mega perfect ending. Who else thinks the ending is perfect. I'm ...

Thanx everyone for the great crits. I will write more soon and if theres and anomunus vote I'll post the next today. Thanx again! ~Pol

Oh man... That short really made me feel empty. Which is a good thing for me. It really moved me, the agony na dhow you described everything so well. Yea... ...

I don't know alot about poetry but that was really good. Umm... I thought your avatar was funny too! :elephant: ~Pol

Its really good, I like how obvoius you make it that this guy is totally in love with Kath. You might want to shorten the first paragraph to not scare ...

Its really good, I like how obvoius you make it that this guy is totally in love with Kath. You might want to shorten the first paragraph to not scare ...

Thanks Ink! I'll definatly check out that, Text Chi, or whatever. :lol: Have you heard? Naruto Movie!!! Coming out the 6th! But Nooooooooo!!! I'll be on a trip then! AAAHHHH!!! ...

Hey Gyr, You know me and I've already read this part. Just felt like saying hi! :elephant: (Snigger) ~Pol

Its short, which is good. Umm... I don't have alot to say except, Shouldn't it be, 'Its my way to die? Anyway... ~Pol