Poetriez

I revised this piece a bit ago here it is: Rock Paper Scissors We destroy the Creed, Where animals feed, Some must take lead. We are paper, We destroy nature ...

thanks I forgot to spell check it and stuf fhaha

that was harsh rose but i want to point out that their is an error in his tittle it should be their not there

I have to make a post on here so people know i updated it orresles they may think its old still

Ok yes you cna just dedit your post and make it longer as stuff comes up. ONe thing your prologue seems really long its like 2500 words prologues arent normally ...

I'm not much of a critic so i just tell you how i liked it I liked it was good sometimes nice to get a comment that isnt destructive

Ok well Way I see it is yes you can be behind in and in between at the same time beacuse looking from the front they can between and from ...

yay im the frist one to rply on your first peice here i go in was nice i liked it but keep writting I guess during the time of my ...

OK I like it but you know what try something different than the normal fantasy Gene try like a person in modern days and being a sorcerer

AWW that was a nice story :) made me feel good inside anywwyaz yah critique ill do it later remind me if you want im a bit tired so im ...

"but there is no refuge in imagination" It is true yet some do take refuge in the mind and they are considered irrational and disillusioned although are were the irrational ...

well see I dont think the layout has a name but I use it sometiems . The capital H was a mistake im fairly confused why it's like that I ...

I swear i Changed the I's to upper case ealyier

yeah i didn't notice i wrote coupe which is also a word ha ha an yeah i could probably expand it i put in punctuation

Yha i know ill proabably revise it its jsut seemded what came out at thre time