Published March 31, 2006
(intro)
Down in my heart I feel a dart
This dart pierces me more than anyone else
If I said I love you, would you say stay the same
If I said I love you, would you wanna be friends,
These answers tear me apart,
Making me feel like I don’t belong,
Maybe I was never meant to love,
I might as well not try.
If I said I love you, would u say stay the same
If I said I love you, would you wanna be friends,
These thoughts of me without you,
Crush me and my spirits,
I might be dense and you love me as well,
This drives me to try.
A light of hope fills me
I start to believe its not me
This is how I feel
If you don’t love me
Tell me, tell me, tell me,
Don’t say no and later come back
If I said I love you, would u say stay the same
If I said I love you, would you wanna be friends,
I don’t care!! For either way.
I still Love you and your still there
So, if you are still there I will love you just as much,
If I said I love you, would u say stay the same,
If I said I love you, would you wanna be friends,
So that is all I have to say,
So I'll let you on your way
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thanks I forgot to spell check it and stuf fhaha
Do you want the extra "one"?
I would suggest using the full word "you," just for literacy's sake.
Check your punctuations in this.
*I'll*
Other than that, my general lyrics suggestion, without having heard the song, would be to check that your syllables seem fairly comfortable- flowing and not too forced.
Sorry, I really can't think of a title.
I'd like to hear this song!
DG