PoeticGlow

I do believe you two are quite right! I shall fix this minor error right away! Thanks for commenting!

That's definitely my plan, unsocialbutterfly!

Thanks so much, Amberla93!

Thanks everyone thus far for your honest, kind, and helpful feedback! :)

Thanks a bunch, Justagirl! :)

Ignatius5453, thanks so much!

Kuyoko, thank you very much! I hope you can find comfort in my words! :)

lele253isme: To answer your question, I look at a "lie" as something that is spoken or said, whereas "deceit" is a form of physical deception...I don't know if that makes ...

Thanks for the feedback, Jessa! :) Allow me to try and clarify this stanza: "That’s it, yes, yes… Up, down, and all around… Your every touch is like a pleasant ...

I like this! It reminds me of a poem I wrote, actually, titled "I'm Sorry", as well! I like how you made the ending abrupt---"like the ending of a friendship"---I ...

This piece is a bit puzzling...I have to agree with Matthews: what exactly are you trying to convey? I mean, the piece is written well, I just don't understand the ...

Thank you very much, tydecker777! I am happy to hear that you enjoy my work! :) It very much warms my heart!

Thank you very much, Sassykat! I appreciate your feedback, and perhaps I shall reconsider the night/alright rhyme again!

This is a good poem! I would just strongly consider adding some punctuation to make your piece more organized! Other then that, you had a very nice rhyme scheme going ...

Temi, I couldn't agree with you more! :) Thanks a bunch for the feedback!