PixieStix

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

I like this. Alot actually. :) I'm going to do this...Plain and simple. I'll start out with the negitives, and then I'll put all the juicy stuff at the end. ...

Woah. Very detailed. I like how you used tounge twisters. I was reading it out loud and kept saying it wrong. XD.

Yeah. It's not a true story. :D

Thanks! But Rayah doesn't get 'scared' easily...The only think that really scares her is lightning... lol.

Posted :)

I'll PM you when I get the second chapter out. Thanks! I'll try to get it by tommarow afternoon or tonight. :)

I loved it. Great job.

LOL. Zeus says whats going on...I think. It says that. Yeah.

OH MY GOD! I was crying! It's amazing Vamp! It's so emotional and it's like you've already lived the moment! Great job! :D