Pippiedooda

Hi! :D Sorry it took me so long, I really like this part :) Its more calm but its kind of needed to fill in the gaps on some things ...

Hi :D I really enjoy this story! I love how you have brought Elliot more into it, he seems so sweet :) There really aren't very many nitpicks here! Great ...

Hey me again! :D This was good, I feel even worse for Shane now though :( I don't have much time at the moment so I'll probably focus more on ...

Hi me again! :P I like where this story is going! Your right too, I think this part is needed as if you just jumped from the man being hurt ...

Hi there :D This is a good piece- especially considering its so short! I'll try my best to review without changing the word count much ;) Two countries, in fact, ...

Hi :D This is really beautiful! Very poetic :) I love how it develops and how peaceful it all feels to read. Crisp autumn leaves began to consume her delicate ...

Hi :D I found this really well written! It made me laugh too :P The world went reeling as Denceress pierced me with her wicked sword. Instead of just 'the ...

Wow I thought this was really good! The excitement through it is great, you've got a brilliant start here and I would love to read more :D Her life, once ...

Hi Colleen! :D I really enjoyed this piece! I hope you continue with it :D He didn't understand this, he didn't care enough to try and understand it. Instead of ...

Hi! :D I thought this was a good prologue, I think you have done well in making the reader curious as to what happened in the summer and what is ...

Hi :) I thought this was really good! I like how it becomes more creepy towards the end, this piece is well written too :D Marigold looked around, not knowing ...

Hi :) This is quite short, nicely written though! The human. A barbaric, murderous race. He and Niva were the last of their kind. As you say 'The human.' just ...

Hi :D I read the first part of your story but forgot to review the revised one :oops: sorry! Anyway, I like where you are going with this! You have ...

Hi me again :D I like this chapter! Its quite short (which makes it easier to review :P) but I like how you are switching between Jackson and Jayson's perspectives, ...

Hi :) sorry I did just do a review that I took over an hour on then I pressed a button and it deleted everything so right now I am ...