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I thought this was adorable. I loved it, and if you don't like her, please don't be mad, but it sounds like a Taylor swift song. I honestly can't think ...

It's me again. I really like this one too. Once again, very few things to change. The only thing that really bugged me was when you said "the meat was ...

I have decided to comment on all of Snow. This one is really good too, but it seems shorter. I like the way she's not concieded, and I love greek ...

Hey Pointe! I am also writing a faerie tale retelling, but mine is Rapunzel. So this caught my attention. you made a few spelling and grammer mistakes, but I don't ...

I am a christian, but I agree with you here. I hate when people do that, and I feel major guilt whenever we drive by a homeless person. This poem ...

While I was reading this, I was thinking "why would she want to cut her hair?" I guess it was just because I have always had long hair, and some ...

Ok, I'm sorry this was the first I commented on, I was just physically unable to take the time and stop to write a review between parts. This is amazing ...

YOU SPELLED ABBY WRONG!!! How many times must we have this disscusion? I like how she calls it magyk, but how can angel tell when Abby spells it magic? I ...

I think this was really good. I also agree it was not cliche with bad word choice, but when Kamas said something about "monster" being cliche, my mind auttimaticly jumped ...

Hi! I'm Abby I like this a lot, even though it was very sad. But a few things confused me. First of all, this may just be me being dense, ...

OK, I need to not fail at friendship anymore so I can be a part of this conversation. Now, I am going to have to have a part were Hazel ...

OH MY GOSH! I LOVE greek mythology, and you retold the story of the season's BEAUTIFULY. I like the way you don't portray Hades as the bad guy, like people ...

I really like the whole dragon thing. Very few stories are acctually about dragons. Or from the dragon's point of view. It's written really well, I love how I can ...

I really liked it, I agree that it is very typical, but i'm sure that won't be forever. The only thing I don't get is why Quinn really doesn't like ...

I think this one was my favorite. The way you say things are really funny, for example "He had to be sure that he wasn’t daydreaming, otherwise, he might lose ...