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Re: Before the Mast: Chapters one and two
Since this is so unbelievably long, I won't be quite so nitpicky as I would be otherwise. Because that would take me hours, and as you know, I am lazy. ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Carsia- Chapter 1
I told you I would review the crap out of your portfolio! Here I am again, for the fourth time is two days. Okay, so I really like Carsia. You ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Little Things
Hello! Here to review. As usual, I have read this in the past, and of course, have fallen in love with it. Here's my review: The format of this is ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: The Days we Forget to Love- *Prologue* *Edited*
Hello there, darling, here as promised! Let's get started. You know I love this, right? I'm pretty sure I've told you, and I'm starting to get impatient because this is ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Null
Hi there! I'm Sakura, and I'm here to review, as I see you don't have any here. Let's get started, shall we? This is an interesting idea, but it really ...
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: The Summer of '69 *Edited Version*
Alright, dear, here as promised. You know how much I love this story, and how it made me cry. I suppose since I've read it about fifty million times I ...
Dec 29, 2012 -
Re: Morgana Le Fay, Prologue
Hello! I figured I'd comment, as I've been very interested in King Arthur lately. This was meant to be a more in-depth review, but at this point, there's really only ...
Dec 23, 2012 -
Re: Third Line Pulse-Chapter 1 (old version)
Hey, here to review. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm not sure what genre it is, as you linked me, but I'm guessing either science fiction or fantasy. By the ...
Apr 24, 2012 -
Re: The Junk Shop
Hi Priceless! This is my first time doing a review in the new format, so forgive me. I really like this story. It's a great idea and I like how ...
Apr 19, 2012 -
Re: I Believe
This sounds a lot like something one would say in church, like where the priest says one line and the congregation says the other? With some of them, I have ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Framework
I took a step towards the glowering stars overhead I'm not sure glowering is the word you want. It means frowning or glaring. My heart was quiet, except for the ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: A howler form Mars 2
I want you to know, I love you for this. It is totally awesome. I can swear on my beloved Zefron poster that someone must've funneled a strong and heavy ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: The Mermaids Song
Alright, sis. Ready for that long awaited review? I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in the wind. I don't think you need ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Red Riding Hood (Contest Entry)
Hello, fellow Gryffindor here to review! Let's start, shall we? I sat on the cold stone seat and watched as Grandma paced back and forward glaring at the ground. I'd ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Harry Potter: The Legacy.
Don't worry, Painter, it's a College thing. Twas decided at camp, a girl was convinced it was going to come when sheleft for college, so don't worry. I haven't loved ...
Aug 14, 2011
