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Piper

  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Before the Mast: Chapters one and two

    Since this is so unbelievably long, I won't be quite so nitpicky as I would be otherwise. Because that would take me hours, and as you know, I am lazy. ...

    Jan 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Carsia- Chapter 1

    I told you I would review the crap out of your portfolio! Here I am again, for the fourth time is two days. Okay, so I really like Carsia. You ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Little Things

    Hello! Here to review. As usual, I have read this in the past, and of course, have fallen in love with it. Here's my review: The format of this is ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days we Forget to Love- *Prologue* *Edited*

    Hello there, darling, here as promised! Let's get started. You know I love this, right? I'm pretty sure I've told you, and I'm starting to get impatient because this is ...

    Dec 30, 2012
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Null

    Hi there! I'm Sakura, and I'm here to review, as I see you don't have any here. Let's get started, shall we? This is an interesting idea, but it really ...

    Dec 29, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, Horror Re: The Summer of '69 *Edited Version*

    Alright, dear, here as promised. You know how much I love this story, and how it made me cry. I suppose since I've read it about fifty million times I ...

    Dec 29, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Morgana Le Fay, Prologue

    Hello! I figured I'd comment, as I've been very interested in King Arthur lately. This was meant to be a more in-depth review, but at this point, there's really only ...

    Dec 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Third Line Pulse-Chapter 1 (old version)

    Hey, here to review. I really enjoyed reading this. I'm not sure what genre it is, as you linked me, but I'm guessing either science fiction or fantasy. By the ...

    Apr 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Junk Shop

    Hi Priceless! This is my first time doing a review in the new format, so forgive me. I really like this story. It's a great idea and I like how ...

    Apr 19, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: I Believe

    This sounds a lot like something one would say in church, like where the priest says one line and the congregation says the other? With some of them, I have ...

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Framework

    I took a step towards the glowering stars overhead I'm not sure glowering is the word you want. It means frowning or glaring. My heart was quiet, except for the ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: A howler form Mars 2

    I want you to know, I love you for this. It is totally awesome. I can swear on my beloved Zefron poster that someone must've funneled a strong and heavy ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Mermaids Song

    Alright, sis. Ready for that long awaited review? I peered out over the side of the ship, my fiery red locks waving in the wind. I don't think you need ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Red Riding Hood (Contest Entry)

    Hello, fellow Gryffindor here to review! Let's start, shall we? I sat on the cold stone seat and watched as Grandma paced back and forward glaring at the ground. I'd ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Harry Potter: The Legacy.

    Don't worry, Painter, it's a College thing. Twas decided at camp, a girl was convinced it was going to come when sheleft for college, so don't worry. I haven't loved ...

    Aug 14, 2011


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