PinkPanther

Is this about suicide? Hmm, it's ok I guess, but not too clear, and obviously not a world class poem. I don't mean to be mean, of course, but if ...

Ok, I won't be harsh on you, here's what I think - it does have a lot of potential, and you don't necessarily need to lenghten the short lines. They ...

That was a very cute poem! I loved it! My favorite line was: I hate how you tease me. How you say “Just kidding!” When I thought you meant it. ...

That was a very dramatic, self-loathing poem, you read a lot of those on this site, but of course everyone's is unique and special in it's own way. I was ...

Beautiful. I liked how it was simple, but still expressed some emotion. It flowed very nicely and made so much sence! Unlike some. Or maybe I'm just stupid.:) Nice poem!

Wow. That was very good. Not that I would encourage anyone to do that to themselves, but that was throughly heart-felt. A good story makes you feel something and this ...

That was...deffinitely one of a kind. I liked it, though most of the time I didn't think it was quite clear what you were talking about. It was unique and ...

Very nice work. I like the truth of it. It really points out the difficulties and fears of most people. Life is too complicated for us to understand, and sadly ...

I think this is my favorite so far! It's really good! I think the- "Lacking in smart words" is what made it so melancholic. It's really a beautiful poem, so ...

I think it's a cute poem. I will not tell you to capitalize the "i"'s, because i don't do that either. But i think you could edit it a bit ...