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Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 2
Hey Losty sorry I took so long!! It's been a busy me. Ok I really like this story and where you're taking it. I think the MC has really developed. ...
Apr 10, 2014 -
Re: Omens of Disgrace - Chapter Two
Alright Scar, finally on to this beautiful chapter. I must say, this is a big leap for your story, A lot of underlying plots are rearing their heads ever so ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: Endless Decent [Part2]
Hey Tenyo, here for saging again. I’m not going to do the prologue, quite simply because there’s nothing to poke there. I’m going to focus pokery here. Don’t take my ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen: Chapter 2
Hey Aurora, back for saging! I have very little advice to give that I haven’t already given for part one. Let’s just go with the positive things this time! I ...
Apr 5, 2014 -
Re: Diakrino- the darkness within (chapter 2)
Hi this is pies for a review! Before we jump in I want to note something about the length of this chapter. I think it's perfectly fine if you're not ...
Apr 4, 2014 -
Re: The Pirate Queen : Chapter 1
hey Aurora! Great to see this having more steam! I really like that even though this is a spin-off. I love spin-offs. I like that you have a lot of ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Endless Descent [Part1]
Hey Tenyo, your unofficial sage is here! (Make it official and I’ll be able to kiss like a fish! :D) I’m going to be as thorough as I can with ...
Apr 2, 2014 -
Re: Escape From Rainbowland Chapter 1
Hey Losty!!! I’m here for saging. (Like Robin Hobb’s Forging, just much deadlier) I will structure my review around three things. Your plot, your dialogue, and your descriptions. I will ...
Apr 1, 2014 -
Re: THE XCHANGE STUDENT
Hey luthurox, here to review as requested! A big welcome to YWS, I hope you’ll like things here! How you found me I have no idea! I’m not a really ...
Mar 2, 2014 -
Re: The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare
Hey NerdBird, thanks for requesting on my review thread! I’m hungry! This review should take me several hours to finish as I will go over every little thing that I ...
Feb 28, 2014 -
Re: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 1: Yes, A Charming Man, Indeed.
Hi rawrafied! Here to review as per food (Sorry I took so long, but this required a really critical read, and that took several hours!!). You need to leave me ...
Feb 26, 2014 -
Re: Home is far
Oakenshield!!! Your ghost does provide us with thoughts in poem form! I really like this poem. I think you should put this to music and sing to us as a ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: The Power Of Fear
Hey Inkypots! Here for the review as requested. I think I shall follow the format of the Poetry Exchange. I really like the neatness of this poem, and it has ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Why is Life so Different? (W.L.D) Chapter 4: Mental Scars and Healing?
Hey GreenTulip! Here to review! First off I would like to say I really like the way you write this. I like the matter-of-fact way you write. There are several ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter Six
Cirute! Here at your service! *Deep Bow and grumbly dwarf voice* I really like this story, and I think it doesn’t deserve a 18+ rating, or maybe it does, but ...
Feb 23, 2014