PhoenixBishop

Hey I'm Phoenix Bishop and I will be your reviewer today. Ok, I really don't know how this will pan out, it sorta just came to me one night, I ...

It's Phoenix here to review your piece. :D So the main character is a horse, that is good. I don't really think you need the prologue. Prologues are usually used ...

I've decided to post another chapter, although I'm still nervous about this. :) I actually want to get it published haha, and so I don't know if this is wise, ...

It's Amon here to do your review I always thought it’d be cool to be famous. I always imagined love would be perfect. And in my deepest dreams I hoped ...

It's Amon to do your first prize review. You have a lot of good advice on this one so I'll do my best to point out different points. ~*~ Above ...

It's me again, here to review as requested. Her pale face, now spoilt with skin that no longer had any flesh to stretch it out evenly, looked tired and used. ...

Amon here with the second review. :elephant: The air felt cold on my skin, and the slight breeze that rushed past me ever so often felt like a hurricane as ...

It's Amon here to do your first review. It has quite a lot of previous reviews so I'll do my best. :D The explosion happened at mid-day. At first it ...

Did you ever wonder what would happen if Adam and Eve never committed original sin? Here's where we find out. \ Have you ever, instead of did you ever But ...

It's Amon reviewing before I announce the winners. I like your back story to why how vampires were created. I do think that the characters at this point don't have ...

Hey I'm Amon and I'm here to review your piece before I announce the winners. First I would like to compliment you on your voice. The characters voice is very ...

I'm going through all my entries and giving my reviews before I reveal the winners. I read this one first. This was really god. I liked how you switched it. ...

Now that the Contest has ended I'm going through all the entries and giving them a review. The trees whispered to each other, rocking back and forth in the icy ...

On my own time Gone by Michael Grant It had bad writing, the characters were flat and acted out of their age. The prose was repetetive, and the dialogue was ...

As requested here's my review Daniel and I were at the shopping centre. Yeah, all right I know, classic loser teenager place to be. Total cliché, but there’s a reason ...