Did you ever wonder what would happen if Adam and Eve never committed original sin? Here's where we find out. 
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God created man in his image; in the divine image he created them; male and female. God blessed them saying: “Be fertile and multiply. Fill the earth and subdue it.” Then the Lord God planted a garden in Eden in the east. Where he placed the man he had formed. Out of the ground the Lord God made various trees grow that were delightful to look at and good for food. With the tree of life in the middle of the garden. The Lord God then took the man and placed him in the Garden of Eden to cultivate and care for it. The Lord God gave man this order. “You are free to eat from any of the trees in this Garden except the tree of Knowledge.”
But the tree of Knowledge never grew. God created Adam and Eve. But they were never tempted to eat the forbidden fruit because it did not grow. So original sin was never committed. The world lives on in ultimate peace for now.
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Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
Anyway let's get right to it,
Well this is an interesting piece here. I can say I definitely haven't run into anyone that's managed to come up with quite this premise before, and it definitely raises a lot of questions. It seems like you've tried to go ahead and created an entire story behind this thing given this is just a preface and I honestly find myself very curious because it seems like this could be a very interesting little thought experiment to explore because it seems like it could alter the very course of history so so much.
This seems like a solid enough platform to be laying right here with the way you've gone about pretty much highlighting the exact change that was made here. I think in that sense, this preface does work quite well to clue us in to the ideas that are going to be explored here and I think for this style of story that is about all one needs. So overall, this is quite an interesting thing to try and think about right here and I think as far as setting up the base for that goes, this preface does that job quite well.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
I'm not sure what to make of this. There isn't much I can review, because the majority of this piece is from the bible itself. I thought it was a bit simple, to be honest; no fancy words, the ending straight up without too many images the reader can focus on. However, I did like the idea, and I thought it was very creative. Not everyone can think of a topic like this, so I'd say good job on the topic. Maybe if you'd work on it some more, and give us [the readers] something to feel or see while reading it. Nice job =)
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Ok the idea is interesting, but if Adam and Eve never sinned then I don't see where there would be conflict. A story needs conflict to grow. I'm intrigued as to what you have planned. I'd like to read an actual peace of it to see how you intrude conflict within a place of peace and happiness.
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