Pernicus

Thank you, I must say the lack of stanzas was on purpose, I have recently been trying to incorporate the format into the theme. It was sort of meant to ...

LOL I get the same problem when I write, In conversation I have a large vocabulary but when writing it does seem to leave me. What sometimes helps is to ...

Well written and I like the suspense at the end, whoever this Fenrien Halstone character is she is definitely familiar with him which will make a part two interesting to ...

Thanks a lot man, I will be sure to go over it and check for those capital letters! and I also very much understand what you mean about the first ...

holy shit why did it triple post ;-; so sorry

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An oddly short prologue. The spacing is also rather odd in terms of the seemingly random spaces. I know you intend to create tension and suspense by spacing the short ...

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An oddly short prologue. The spacing is also rather odd in terms of the seemingly random spaces. I know you intend to create tension and suspense by spacing the short ...

no problem :)

Well written indeed. Unlike what you think it does not suck. The language you use is original for the most part and descriptive dialogue is really immersive. You make an ...