PerfectWeapon

Thank you so much for the review! I am so happy that you like it. I am writing in past tense, you are right. Once again, thank you for the ...

It Worked!!!!

Thank you for the review! I enjoyed reading it. -Like birds who's wings are broken You live without direction. ~PerfectWeapon

Okay, so the present tense and past tense meant that Bill was there on my side currently, and before the dog had bitten my foot. I don't see what is ...

Ok, so I was right. Thnx for the clear up ^_^

This was a great review, however; when I said "Gastrin is 66," I meant he is 66 years old. If I had said what Elijah was going to, it wouldn't ...

Thank you so much for the review. The beginning is going to tie into later in the story. The story I'm telling is how it all leads up to it. ...

Hai PerfectWeapon here! right off in the beginning I see no capitalization! This is is irking to me, for either one of two reasons. Rather A: You don't understand capitalization, ...

Wrong link, sorry This is the right one.

Ok I will post the link here.

Thank you so much! I am working on another piece, it is called The Suicidal Encounter That Saved. If you get a chance I would love your opinion!

Ok, thnx! Should I go ahead and post the next chapter, or wait until I get the five comments/reviews?

Haha. What are metro parks?

I love doing it, I still do it!

Just out of curiosity, what does stuck up a tree mean? Lol I feel stupid